Today I met the future, he wore blue. We giggled in the dappled sun and I carried on smiling until pretty raindrops fell from his eyelashes. My teeth chattered, not from cold but from excitement. Then he smiled, just for me, that lightening smile.
The smoke we made still lingers on my clothes, sweet and sultry. We unravelled the hours playing flying games, soaring over damp green grass and getting lost in trees. I talked too much and laughed 'til I was giddy.
Today I met the future. He wore blue.
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Anyway, this is perfect. +fave
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Blue: What are you doing?
Remi: I'm listening to the world.
Blue: Oh and what does it say?
Remi: ...AHHHHHHHHH!
Actually, that's freaky as hell. I was with a guy who cheated on me, and I was getting tired of waiting for a good guy to come along...but today I may have met someone. So yes, methinks you will!
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I hate to break this to you, but being a coward is not a legitimate career.
It's amazing.
I like the simplicity of it. =]
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I don't break hearts; I just dent them. <3
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I hate to break this to you, but being a coward is not a legitimate career.
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Blue: What are you doing?
Remi: I'm listening to the world.
Blue: Oh and what does it say?
Remi: ...AHHHHHHHHH!
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This is such a beautiful tragedy
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I hate to break this to you, but being a coward is not a legitimate career.
One thing here: 'till' is not a word, unless you are talking about what a cashier collects money in. This is something I am anal about, so if you can resist my anality, keep it. Personally, I would say it has to be 'until' or, its abbreviation 'til. But two 'l's? I get worried.
Then he smiled that lightening smile, just for me.
This sentence in here is fine. If you feel like modifying it just to see how it works out- there is not anything wrong with it- what about these?
Then, just for me, he smiled, just for me, that lightening smile.
Or, if you don't like the repetition, take out one of them.
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to eat the fruit of all the trees of the garden of life.
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